Score: 8

"gj 10x!"

submission: Teen Pregnancy

date: September 15, 2009

This was amusing. The lack of animation kind of ruined it for me, but voice acting and writing were good.

Score: 0

"Exactly what I thought it would be."

submission: Monopoly Reality

date: August 30, 2009

I don't get your fifth point, It's hard to give positive criticism towards something you don't like. The animation was horribly lacking, considering the only animation is lip syncing and stuff popping up here and there. Shouldn't have taken you too long to make.

Usually these kinds of animations are very script-based, and I really wouldn't mind if the script was good. The script was basically:
Observation about the monopoly game, the say something at the same time and/or laugh together and repeat.

NO OFFENSEEEEEE.

Score: 4

"Uhh"

submission: 2009 Show Reel

date: August 19, 2009

A video of you drawing should not be in your demo reel (or just pictures of your drawings, for that matter). Your animation reel should show your skills in ANIMATION.
Proving you can draw in Photoshop doesn't say much about your animation abilities. So almost half of that was just silly.

The rest wasn't that good, but at least it was animation.

Score: 3

"Nothankyou."

submission: Guitar Tuner

date: August 13, 2009

You could just download AP Tuner, put your guitar in front of your microphone and tune it like that. I don't see this as something I'd ever use.

Score: 10

"I'll make you a star."

submission: Cuboy Ep.3

date: August 11, 2009

I love everything about this. EVERYTHING.

Score: 8

"BOOM"

submission: BlownOutOfProportion4(3)

date: August 8, 2009

This has a lot of funny situations, but the writing just seems like you're trying way too hard. It's like you're trying to imitate how kids "REALLY" talk, but you just get an unrealistic exaggerated version of it.

It also seemed like you were trying to go to a B-storyline with the dad being drunk, but that really didn't go anywhere.

It was way too long for it's content, you could have cut down scenes like the tomato stomping ones.

This could have been better with a bit more polish on the writing, but I still fairly enjoyed it cause I was still somewhat interested of what's gonna happen.

Good job,
WINK.

Score: 8

"funny"

submission: [Prototype]

date: August 5, 2009

Made me laugh, which is THE MOST IMPORTANT.

But the animation could have been much better.

Score: 8

"Cute"

submission: Zimmi EP 1

date: July 10, 2009

That cave reminded me of something. HMM.

It was very cute. In a very kids fable kind of way, not exactly my thing, but it kept my attention. The sound editing was very well done.

Score: 7

"Close"

submission: Pirate Launch

date: July 4, 2009

Fun game with a couple of annoyances.

The length of the sea should be cut in half. These kind of games are built so when you have all of the upgrades it should be fairly easy to finish the game. I had em all and struggled to finish it. And when you do finish it, it's not even fun.. it's like 4 minutes of balancing myself... It's not a rush.

That's really the main problem. The graphics and layout are nicely done. The cutscenes could have used some more sounds but that's about it.

Score: 8

"mmmmmm"

submission: 4th of July Extravaganza

date: July 4, 2009

Reminds me of Andrew K.

It was cute.